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This is not a love song
(Where have they all gone)
The once true love can’t be denied
(Yet always thrown to the wayside)
No comfort  from what I hold on to
(Nothing more than a shadow of you)
Grasping at straws to find the gold
(And I’m feeling so damned old)
Platitudes of love running miles
(Same old lines within the smiles)

It all comes down to how long
I can hold my breath
Sinking to new depth
Floating to where I must begin
And learning anew how to swim

This might be a love song
(Though I can’t say for how long)
Uncertain of any direction
(Reaching for any connection)
So many voices calling
(Yet still I feel I’m falling)
I may still cling to this belief
(Though I might find no relief)
Perhaps there is still some chance
(Might find some new romance)

It all comes down to how long
I can hold my breath
Sinking to new depth
Floating to where I must begin
And learning anew how to swim

[Bridge]

This will be a love song
(Swim our way through the throng)
If we’ll ever find forever
(Alone as always and yet never)
Making our way to come together
(Finding our way from wherever)
Spinning circles, floating endless
(Fleeing from this loneliness)
Someday we just might meet again
(To finally hold on to each others’ hand)

It all comes down to how long
I can hold my breath
Sinking to new depth
Floating to where I must begin
And learning anew how to swim
©2007-2009 ~icharbezol
:iconicharbezol:

Author's Comments

Waiting for love is like sinking into the darkest depths...

Wrote this after talking to a friend, Sarah, [link] . Thanks for the inspiration :)

Vocals done with minor distortion (parenthetical parts) as though somewhat underwater and echo-ey. Clean guitar, none of my usual wish for alternate tunings, ringing, with a little more distortion kicked in during whatever the bridge ends up being, something I imagine to be almost crashing and wave-like but unsure at the moment.

The full title is Hold On (Floating Endless)

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:iconkoronsangel:
this really good....

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take every little moment from life that you can, you will never have the chance to claim it again.
:iconicharbezol:
Thankye :)

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I stood among them, but not of them; in a shroud
Of thoughts which were not their thoughts.
:iconwaves-of-illusion:
you are a man of boundless depth ...

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The-Heart Club:[link]
Apophysis-->[link]
:iconicharbezol:
Luckily, I have always been able to swim well

--
I stood among them, but not of them; in a shroud
Of thoughts which were not their thoughts.

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